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“Morning, mourning” is the little blade here. Both poems feel like weather doing emotional labor, which is frankly very on brand for weather. Snow makes the world quiet enough for red birds and bent spines to become revelations. Morning is less polite. It arrives viscous, insistent, dragging us out of dreams whether grief is finished with us or not. The sun does not ask if we are ready to rise. Rude little star. Holy little tyrant. Still, we rise.

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A wondrous bit of writing

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