A little bit “non-dual” at the end but not too much since the poet clearly believes throughout that there is an “other” he is writing to. In other words, it was “spiritually wholesome” for me. And a great read first thing on a Thursday (NZ time) morning.
This is gorgeous. So much to love here. I've read it over several times. So good! Thank you . Love, Virg
I thought this is me meditating and longing for God, so beautiful! Is that the meaning🙂
It means exactly whatever it means to you. 🙃😃
❤️❤️❤️❤️ beautiful!
Shew. Whoa. I want to make a pastor joke, but that's some stupid self-protection from what you just wrote. Phew. That was intense. Also beautiful.
What can I say that has not already been said. Kim I am honoured to have received this today. Thank you very much! ✨🙏🏻
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Gosh! This got to me! So visceral, raw, yet tender… just beautiful.
I especially loved:
“If I look upon you… pause to see you,
the shimmer of my gaze will pierce,
a needle pumping oblivion,
recognition high into your need.”
Thank you, Virginia.
🖤🌹
Oh my god! Audible oh my god! You have such a gift Kim!!! This is absolutely incredible! Bravo 👏 has to be one of my favorite pieces on here!
Thank you, kind friend
Beautiful. 🤩
A little bit “non-dual” at the end but not too much since the poet clearly believes throughout that there is an “other” he is writing to. In other words, it was “spiritually wholesome” for me. And a great read first thing on a Thursday (NZ time) morning.
Hey! Thanks for coming by!
That last stanza,
"For it was never me you longed for.
But only my reflection
of your own delicious
unwinding."
That hit! So good!
It’s the thing… we desire most …for ourselves.
So true! Your writing is so good!
Thank you, Laura. Good day?
Oh this was good ! It was very lightly sensual, very well done
Thanks. 🙏🏻
Intense <3
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Very good. Really enjoyed.
Thanks John.
Ooo this was kinda spicy :) I liked it!
Heh. 😏
So powerful. This touched my soul…
“For it was never me you longed for.
But only my reflection
of your own delicious
unwinding.”
Thank you! 🙏🏻 hope you’re well.
I needed this today 🫶
I hear that.
Wow what an ending and the title is brilliant. Love these fiery verses from you 🔥
My tender friend,
If I turn myself fully to you,
it will ruin you.
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The fires still burn. 😎